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These days, more and more people have adopted unhealthy lifestyles. I believe that there are someseveral LRGR reasons for this, and also practical solutions for this problem LRGR . In this essay, I will be writing aboutdiscuss LRGR the reasons and solutions of to LRGR this change. TRCC

In recent years, people have busy lifelives LRGR and do not have enough time to exercise TRCC . People have to work many hours to make ends meet and they have several jobs to earn extra income. This is because wage iswages are LRGR not increasing much due todespite LRGR inflation and people cannot afford standard living. TRCC In addition TRCC , fast food is very addictive and people cannot quit eating fast food because they LRGR are so cheap. While healthy foods such as vegetables and fruits are expensive, they can eat fully LRGR when they eat junk food because of the price. TRCC

In order to solve this issue, governments should educate citizens about the danger of unhealthy lifestyles LRGR . For example, they can campaign how dangerous unhealthy lifestyles can lead to lifestyle related disease such as diabetes, obesity and heart diseases. TRCC LRGR Moreover, they can support citizens to buyin buying healthy foods such as vegetables and fruits by decliningreducing LRGR tax on these foods. In this way, citizens can easily access to LRGR these healthy foods, which makeshelps them lead more healthier lifestyles. TRCC

In conclusion, people are havingleading unhealthy lifestyles because they are busy and healthy ingredients are too expensive. I believe that governments should educate citizens about the risk of this lifestylerisks of such lifestyles LRGR and also support citizens so that they can buy healthy food more easily. TRCC